Honey Do – Short Script Review (Available for Production)

Honey Do

A woman confronts her lazy husband with a long list of things he’s promised to do around the house. When he doesn’t budge, she decides to do them herself.

Ah, Mawwage. Mawwaiage… that bwessed awwangement. That dweam within a dweam. Twue wove… (Reviewers note: if this reference has you scratching your head, then shame on you. Go rent The Princess Bride right now.)

But seriously. Marriage; what a sacred institution. That blissful experience of merging lives with another soul so utterly that you complete each others’ sentences – and totally lose any hesitation to make rude bodily noises in your beloved’s presence. ‘Course, it takes a few years to get to that stage… at least for most couples.

Unfortunately for Mindy – the protagonist of “Honey Do” – her marriage with Frank has gone beyond even that.   Frank’s retired, and Mindy’s put on a few pounds. These days, Frank’s lost all interest – spending day after day in his basement man-cave, watching Nascar and snoring on the couch. Despite Frank’s promises to fix up the house, things have really gone to pot upstairs. The car’s not working – and Frank’s looted the living room furniture for his “office.” Mindy’s at her wit’s end. Scrounging up a few pennies, she heads to her local hardware store – determined to find the tools and know-how to do it herself. But when she ventures between the shelves… will she find something she needs even more desperately?

A good-natured riff on marriage gone wrong, Honey Do is part Edgar Allan Poe, with a touch of Christopher Guest. It’s a well-written and fun combination – perfect for any director of comedy.

About the writer: An award winning writer AND photographer, Marnie Mitchell Lister’s website is available at http://brainfluffs.com/. Marnie’s had 5 shorts produced (so far) and placed Semi-final with her features in Bluecat.

Pages: 7

Budget: Very basic. One house. One Home Depot-esque location. Three characters.




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3 responses to “Honey Do – Short Script Review (Available for Production)

  1. Marnie Mitchell – Lister is one of those writers who can make you laugh out loud, fall on the floor, pound your fists on the carpet, and crawl on your hands and knees out the door gasping for air.

    An intelligent comedy about a disenchanted wife and her ogre husband. And it shows us how one can change their lives with just a little elbow grease.

    Great job, Marnie.

  2. Pingback: Congratulations to Marnie Mitchell-Lister – Getting to Know You Optioned! | Shootin' the Shorts

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